Sunday, May 13, 2012

Let's Keep A Secret: A Hinata Hyuuga Love Story: Ch 5: Coming To Terms



            Hinata was on her way to meet Sasuke at his house. She had called him and asked him if they could get back together, and Sasuke, unaware that she left him for Kiba, agreed to see her. Hinata’s heart was pounding in her chest and she felt dizzy was nervousness and excitement.

            Hinata crossed her arms and looked around, trying to keep her mind off of Kiba, and Sasuke. And what Sasuke would say. She was wearing a dark blue jean mini shirt, a dark purple V neck with purple tube socks sticking out of her black Ugg boots. She made sure to look cute for Sasuke and show a little skin for him too.

            As Hinata approached Sasuke’s door, her heart was pounding out of her chest. She knocked on his door in time with her beating heart and she took a step back as she waited and heard rushed and eager footsteps come to the door.

            Sasuke opened the door and half smiled at Hinata, he welcomed her in and she nodded as a thank you and she ducked inside. Sasuke motioned her to the couch in the living room where they had made love many times and she felt almost dirty sitting there. Sasuke took a seat across the room from her and gave her a burning and analytical stare.

            “So,” Sasuke started, Hinata looked up at him with a hopeful look shining in her soft eyes, “you decided to come back,” Sasuke spat. He almost sounded disgusted at the idea of dating her anymore.

            Hinata decided to cut him some slack and she looked down at her lap, “Yes Sasuke… I realized that I was stupid to leave you and that I really do love you…” Hinata mumbled, more nervous than ever.

            When Sasuke was delayed in replying Hinata looked up at him with her mouth open. “Well the funny thing is, I had another girlfriend this whole time,” Sasuke chuckled malevolently.

            Hinata’s expressed changed to shock, “Who the hell is she?!” Hinata demanded as she got up from the couch, all hint of nervousness seemed to flood out of her and transform into anger.

            Sasuke chuckled another wicked chuckle and he looked at Hinata arrogantly, “It was Sakura of course. She’s really easy you know. Just like you,” Sasuke taunted while looking Hinata up and down with disgust.

            Hinata dropped her head and started to cry, she cursed the tears that fell down her face and she clenched her fist in anger at him and in anger at her inability to control her emotions.

            “You bastard!” she screamed shrilly, this caused Sasuke to jump in his seat a little bit from surprise at the sudden wave of sound that hit him. Hinata kicked the coffee table in front of her with her heel and she stomped out, slamming the door behind her.

            Once she was completely sure that she was out of Sasuke’s line of sight, she broke down. She let the let the tears fall and she hugged herself from her rough sobbing, she was afraid that if she didn’t hug herself, the sobbing would split her in half. Then she would be like her heart, split in half.

            Hinata walked slowly and somberly home, she kicked the dirt and watered the dirt road with her tears. Anyone who wanted to find her could follow her tears and easily find her. Hinata was shocked that she had enough water in her body to supply so many tears.

            As Hinata made her way home, she didn’t stop to talk to anyone. Not even Neji, who looked genuinely concerned for her well being.

            Hinata made her way to her room and she slammed the door and locked it, she didn’t want to be bothered with frivolous talking or half hearted consolation from her family.

            As Hinata crawled into fetal position on her side and let her tears fall sideways off of her soft face and onto the pillow, she realized something. She gave up everything for Kiba, a guy who probably wasn’t even worth it in the first place. This made Hinata shake her head and bury herself into her knees. She wanted everything, and she ended up having nothing.



            A few days after Hinata broke things off with Kiba, he and Ino got back together. Kiba from then on acted like Hinata didn’t exist and he went out of his way to rub Ino in her face.

            Sasuke convinced Sakura that Hinata was texting him and asking for him back, when that couldn’t have been farther from the truth, and Sakura and her friends started threatening Hinata. Sakura and her friends taunted Hinata to no end and even went so far as to stand outside of her house by means to threaten and even harm Hinata if she even thought about coming outside.

            Sakura’s tyranny with Sasuke was short lived however, she decided that she wanted Naruto and she left Sasuke for Naruto. But Sakura convinced Naruto that Hinata was an enemy, and the taunting never ceased. Sasuke eventually lost his popularity and spent his time looking sad and getting ignored and rejected by everyone.

            Hinata never recovered from the acts of Sakura or her love for Kiba and Sasuke. But it pleases me to say, that one day Hinata picked herself up and she decided to join her school’s cheerleading team and was immediately let on Varsity, even if it was her first year cheering. She eventually became one of the most popular and influential people in school and Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke, Kiba, and Ino were rejected by most of the student body.


Authors Note: Did you like my story? J believe it or not, but everything in this story happened to me. It is insanely close to what happened in reality, dialogue and all. I figured that my story was a good dramatic love story so I portrayed it in the Naruto world. The last ending paragraphs where we were catching up on all of the character’s, all of that happened to me too. I figured the best stories are the ones that are closest to reality right? ;)

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